A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAZQllASc686
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—536Please respect copyright.PENANA06GlKPP82E
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANA9pjtwBY6wo
你指標題?536Please respect copyright.PENANABrLc7Tmchy
但有時訂標題也很困難~536Please respect copyright.PENANAfIkOkXtPMC
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAn0rSSXtbSe
嗯對啊,536Please respect copyright.PENANARkqz4nWsZR
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAVCjEB8oNFs
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,536Please respect copyright.PENANAZ961IVokcX
所以沒有中心思想在。536Please respect copyright.PENANAvtM56EviXZ
我猜的對嗎?
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAdw3tFV6VCV
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。536Please respect copyright.PENANAojMkAzc8iN
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?536Please respect copyright.PENANAn4AoNyFZfl
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANABFM7Zhnbme
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!536Please respect copyright.PENANA2EPOZoRpxM
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAzdXT2cpsln
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAWbJ5L9oTr1
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD536Please respect copyright.PENANA6UOjkL9bma
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。536Please respect copyright.PENANACDKfQq5F3x
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,536Please respect copyright.PENANAz3nd9nmCe2
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANALA7UOFsLld
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。536Please respect copyright.PENANAkSISc77FGg
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。536Please respect copyright.PENANAO07w95fItW
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANADzFEyhkZnR
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。536Please respect copyright.PENANAgE7cD1NEjR
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANALFUK81uohr
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAQAc0qoXxPG
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAjWolIWrJby
好啊。
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANADlOXRno1ey
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。536Please respect copyright.PENANAkhEWSMQEl0
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。536Please respect copyright.PENANAWnPFjgYYx7
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。536Please respect copyright.PENANABxSlAjir9Z
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAP1Un5kEKVG
好的,536Please respect copyright.PENANAput6XUPj6j
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、536Please respect copyright.PENANANsAekX36bZ
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAIwEAq1Nmp9
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,536Please respect copyright.PENANAhMGCEc733g
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAVXNipvzVfC
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAhEPV3gsLLj
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。536Please respect copyright.PENANADkeMU1aXnx
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料536Please respect copyright.PENANAjQDkg8RNsS
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。536Please respect copyright.PENANAtHhTfCMMDe
比如:536Please respect copyright.PENANAyDB4Q4eG3G
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。536Please respect copyright.PENANAfMAmK2P5po
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。536Please respect copyright.PENANAgwP953p54N
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAJYhK6K3V9U
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAOYQuRXRE3m
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANA4B3VuboHms
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAKoc6OMj4jm
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係536Please respect copyright.PENANAOC9Z7bDaRQ
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANA6q23YLwf5H
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAp8nsH3SWmr
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,536Please respect copyright.PENANA01vLGYMEAY
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAG6MVsq8mXI
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAJ8TS30j35U
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:536Please respect copyright.PENANAhSw2MkvMM3
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。536Please respect copyright.PENANALH1xvmYdnP
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANANTuZckiRuo
哦~
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAg5uZXNYhNF
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:536Please respect copyright.PENANAOFTxQZnOXV
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)536Please respect copyright.PENANAVIFfI1cEVn
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)536Please respect copyright.PENANAWrcKO9iEKY
的故事
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAMVcfLFYj1P
好的、536Please respect copyright.PENANACuSdbrXkPO
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANArbT65RYXZ5
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAWs2Soa56ix
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANALWbUG6bTXN
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANA0zcA5QQ0kM
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAhpsvn4fcIZ
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANA0183s8qLKV
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:536Please respect copyright.PENANAECDIs2mCUv
1.『爭執』536Please respect copyright.PENANAJRw00467MS
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』536Please respect copyright.PENANAvq5IFb88hk
3.『分手的情人(主角)』536Please respect copyright.PENANANwJNLYnjSm
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』536Please respect copyright.PENANAZ5i5ngEg40
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAXf8V5IeQCI
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAZbB5wQ9h9H
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAT1S6qkhQzm
那如果加入復仇呢536Please respect copyright.PENANAtVFGcWseqG
搶她大姐的未婚夫536Please respect copyright.PENANAyv0kpUMLzm
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAw206cZAa7X
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了536Please respect copyright.PENANAP5B5rSErjF
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……536Please respect copyright.PENANAfYPBi21zyi
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAMQ7xnI3dWk
好的,了解啦
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAtNiO3YPmZS
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAIoNMWwU0xr
不一定要有吧~?536Please respect copyright.PENANAqCDGmh3YC9
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANAEgeNPFk289
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANA4DDF2F6grr
比如536Please respect copyright.PENANAAZBo4xc0a7
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』536Please respect copyright.PENANAkfUoSAkeVe
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANApN87t9ocPz
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!536Please respect copyright.PENANAuzdvd1TP1L
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD536Please respect copyright.PENANAMvUvGlfZgu
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAHaSJxZUjn6
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 536Please respect copyright.PENANAvP9XkGdjCC
A君:536Please respect copyright.PENANA5wlqP9Fqs0
你好厲害啊!536Please respect copyright.PENANApblvcxDbdr
(重新把故事編排)536Please respect copyright.PENANAHuNlMoMfMK
龍晨P:536Please respect copyright.PENANAto2qXO07bv
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~536Please respect copyright.PENANAsP4Yxho1RN