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這次不用8+6的格式,而是用14行的寫法。當然韻律方面和傳統的西方十四行詩的abab格式有點不同,畢竟是兩種不同語言,所以我就用了aabb bbcc ccdd ee的自創雙行押韻方式,這和詩中所述的自創舞步也有異曲同工之妙吧。422Please respect copyright.PENANAzXuQHhZuox
之後我會嘗試不同的格律,希望在嚴守格律的同時,也希望寫出更多有創意和有詩意的作品。422Please respect copyright.PENANA2stO3uIv6c
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