
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』328Please respect copyright.PENANAVisJfPicbl
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:328Please respect copyright.PENANA1Up3cOCMwG
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐328Please respect copyright.PENANAnxbefCQvEr
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆328Please respect copyright.PENANAiFywduILF2
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲328Please respect copyright.PENANAIGbh0RSULn
帶出角色支線328Please respect copyright.PENANAsoEfefVebi
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破328Please respect copyright.PENANAwlee59nFOU
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫328Please respect copyright.PENANATa9IXakRbw
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴328Please respect copyright.PENANA8RArn2nmyU
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌328Please respect copyright.PENANA2g4jz073tI
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊328Please respect copyright.PENANAA6QkITPv5x
殺人犯vs富婆328Please respect copyright.PENANAMdVeRQxynp
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌328Please respect copyright.PENANAgQSzUqegfZ
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴328Please respect copyright.PENANA9zIy2msAY6
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕328Please respect copyright.PENANAjJi9JBX4MK
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。328Please respect copyright.PENANALygEpjyw2b
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。328Please respect copyright.PENANApb69oPvyWa
魂之詩328Please respect copyright.PENANAyrJtA3BU3x
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